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Whoa

That was actually really cool. It must have taken a long time to do it all in chalk. Was it done in one day or did you have to wait for the chalk to wash off? Also, will you be doing another one?

lol

Wow you guys actually made a flash video. I'm giving you an 8 because the sound was a bit... annoying & statically sometimes. Although, I'm really impressed with what you have. Although did you really have to add in the game? Come on man. That was pushing it a bit.

I give myself bonus points for knowing everyone's voice. :D

Oh Wow.

This must have taken a long time to make. It was well worth it though. Thats was so funny. Great job!

Just Thinking...

I played this last year, but didn't give it much thought for some reason. I came back and played it again, and realized how well done it is. I don't even care about the Hentai pics. I just like the game play. You did an excellent job with it.

Things i would change/add: The ability to sell buildings you buy. Downgrade a building for some quick cash. Instead of buying Equipment for each girl, you should have an actual item menu, that allows you to equip anything on any girl. It got tiring going back in forth between the screens. After you get so many girls, you tend to forget if you bought things for someone. More abilities for the girls. I noticed a lot of them don't have any, yet they still earn AP. A lot of people complained about not having BGM, but I just had music on my computer playing, so it's not really needed. The game itself is such a large file, that adding any BGM would probably make it load incredibly slow.

I like how you had a verity of girls, but there's a lot of loli type characters, which I'm not into. I think it would be interesting to have different categories, for when you "buy" girls. And depending on where your building is located, different costumers will be into different types of girls. That would give it an interesting concept when planning out which girl to get next.

I notice a lot of games are doing awards/trophies like things. If you make another one, you could add some of those. Actually, now that I think about it.... When you max out a girl you should be giving the option have them "retire" and when they do, you unlock/receive an item or some cash for maxing out the girl.

Anyway, I hope this has been a helpful review, and I look forward to seeing what you do with the game - If you decide on doing a second one.

~Oralom

Okay, but...

It was okay, but it was lacking in game play. It was way to vague on the areas to click and there really wasn't that much different things you can do. The music does get highly annoying after awhile, but I just muted it.

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I'm agreeing with the person below me. I don't care much for the controls. It seems a bit backwards to me. Down should move the guy down and not up. Also, it gets a bit repetitive. Maybe have new music per level or even different bars. I know when I go out we bar hop.